Awe. thats adorable. short but sweet. love love love it.

So short but so effective
very good!!
i loved it
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This poem is really good. keep up the good work and please comment on one of mine

Very short, yet still very good... 5/5 keep up

Nice write! Short and sweet. Keep up the good work!

Really good peice, very short but says so much and hol a lot of meaning.

5/5

That was beautiful! I have such trouble writing love poems, but u did it wonderfully! Even the rhythm was great, it was also shot sweet and, expressed its feel/emotion perfectly, Amazing job=D 5/5

Very short but at the same time its powerful. I love it. 5/5

Nice :) SHort - but puts across a very clear message :)

Peace.

I Muy bueno! Excellente lol.... I loved it. You're a very talented writer

Wow thats like the best short poem ive ever read
keep it up!

Short but sweet, had a strong emotion to it, i liked it very much, 5/5

Short, sweet, to the point. Very good. Few words, big message.

WOW im really feeling this poem, i can relate to it so much.
another one of you fab master pieces.

gema xpxoxoxox

Short sweet and packed with emotion
thats how i like them!

Laura
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Aww. your going in my favourites lol
keep it up!!

much love and many kisses,
bex

Awwww, i must say your short poems say it all. they are so very well written. keep them up!! x x x x x