by Sharmyne Oct 20, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Just say you remember the sweet smell of grandma's perfume the way it smelled in the morning and how grandpa would snore on the recliner and have a smoke in his hand. |
by Lyn
A lovely poem with lots of emotional content. I really like it. We need to value those times from childhood and those people who shaped what we have become. Should the 'remember' on the next to the last line be 'remembering'? Always check spellings and grammar and edit if necessary and......keep writing. |