DREAM

by brittany   Oct 20, 2005


After a long day of work i lay
down in my bed my head
filled with thoughts of you
then theres a knock on my
door a big smile comes
across my face to my
surprise its you standing
in my door way you say
i just had to be with you
so we go in my room
i put on a movie
and i lay in you arms and
lay my head on your
shoulder and look into
your eyes and run my
hand down your cheak
and then we fall asleep
and then when i open my eyes
your not there and i realize it was only
a dream.

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  • 19 years ago

    by SexMeister69

    How have you been brit? I haven't heard from you in ages! I hope all is going well m'dear!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Curious Me*~

    Nice poem. I feel like this sometimes. I want my boyfriend there and he's not. Where are they when we need them?
    lol
    5/5 keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    I like it....it would flow better if you dropped the "and" at the beginning of the lines.

    These lines: and i lay in you arms and
    lay my head on your

    would flow better if you tried:

    i lay in your arms
    putting my head on your

    Food for thought....nice write.

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