I like it....it would flow better if you dropped the "and" at the beginning of the lines.

These lines: and i lay in you arms and
lay my head on your

would flow better if you tried:

i lay in your arms
putting my head on your

Food for thought....nice write.

Nice poem. I feel like this sometimes. I want my boyfriend there and he's not. Where are they when we need them?
lol
5/5 keep up the good work

How have you been brit? I haven't heard from you in ages! I hope all is going well m'dear!!!