Omg You have gotten so far on the site! Good Job! I Kinda stopped for a while but I think I'm gonna get back on and write a lot more poems. I'm entering the Poetry Contest in school. You should too. Well ttyl
-Bambi

Hey thanx

Woops i think i just commented myself XD lol ya woops

Wonderful! I loved this poem! It has a nice flow... Great job!!

For a late night poem it's pretty good, I got into it and everything. It's a good flow, and an interesting rhyme scheme I haven't seen before. And I don't mean to be too picky, but you said you liked comments that were of constructive criticism, and if there's one thing I might change (I couldn't find anything else, it was pretty flawless) it would be the word 'plop'. It almost made the smoothness of your vocabulary and sentences come to a hault... But it's not a big deal, as it's still a great poem , you have wonderful work, and I can't wait to see more. :) Great job again.

Great poem, like all your others, i really enjoyed readin it!!! keep up the work, ur very talented!! xoxox

Ok so before i forget i wanted to say that i loved your quotes, i wish i could comment on them but i cant...

also i liked this poem, but loved the first two lines, they were a great hook for the poem and really got my attention, it was unqiue too

Wow this is really good! 5/5

Mallori

Very powerful poem so full of emotion 5/5