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by Maz Oct 20, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
This is the 1st poem in a while, hope its OK.... In Death I See Hope: insufficient emotion, breaking limbs and souls combined, foul play beyond conception, a twisted, malfunctioned mind. Tired of this fakeness, abundant lack of hope, screaming into darkness, hanging by my own rope. Failure of acceptance. society's shadow falls, lingering in hatred, deafened by depressions calls. Swallowed by the pain, covered in solitudes grip, allowing no communication, so in death I begin to slip. Grasping to a cliff edge, no thoughts circle nor sanity found, Faith lost among my sins, And in tragedy i begin to drown. Lifeless soul unwanted, fractured beyond repair, A broken little rag doll, a girl trapped in despair. Fragile from the past, reflections lost and torn, for my heart and soul now frozen, this I deeply mourn. A grave calls to me coldly, silence marks my way, solitude and heartache, now all that I convey. Love and Hugs xX MAZ Xx
by jac
Very well written, good flow, and great wording! keep it up! -peace-
by sabbi
HEY THIS POEM IS TOUCHING ITS TRUE AND HONEST AWESOME
by Stabbylou
Cool poem, well written, you use good language... I likes :) well done x