What can I say? This poem is fantastic. The meaning is efficiently developed throughout the poem, and the end is also very shocking. I like how your diction, structure and imagery all develop thouroughly. The only criticism I can make is that some of the lines are significantly longer than some, changing the flow dramamtically, and the ideas do not seem to change with this variation in structure. A little revision will make this a perfect work of art. Well done!

Good write i can relate

Really nice poem! Very sad... Keep on the good work!

I really liked the title. It caught my attention. The poem was well written and definitely gave the title some meaning. Well done.

Its very good.. i likes it well... very creative. mmhmmm.

~David

... lol fingers itching to click huh? funny. its fine .. i dont care. lol

Wow that was a good poem..nice imagery as well.You are good writter..keep up the good work

Very sad poem. I thought you did a good job wth the emotion in this poem.

I absolutly LOVED this one! keep up the good work.

Great poem. the feelings are bery well expressed

Great poem, its so sad and so well written,
one small suggestion how ever is with this line

She rids herself of memories from that horrid day

I think it would flow better if you add a word or two to it, e.g

She rids herself of memories from that cold and horrid day

Anyways 5/5