I really love your poem... its beautiful! my favorite verse if the first.....
"I want to hold you, touch you
all through out the day
i want to spend my life with you
if that's ok"
i think that those lines sum up many people's feelings, including mine! I just found your work and i was looking for the poem you said was your favorite ('when') and i saw this one and for some reason was intruiged so i read it, and i'm glad i did! So i liked this poem soo much im gonna add you as one of my "favorite artists" haha... i'll read more of your work too!
xo adge
(p.s. the girl this poems for should be real happy to be the inspiration for such an amazing poem!!! )