A Single Drop...

by NightKeeper   Oct 20, 2005


She sees the water droplets fall
But she ignores them
Till many have fallen
The little area shes in is filling up
It reaches up to her waist
Yet she doesn't want to see that
She's starting to drown
Many people call to her
Trying to reach her
But she just ignores them
Not wanting to see that she's wrong
Now it reaches up to her neck
Although she's afraid
She stands still
She listens to the water droplets fall
The fear starts to get to her and
She starts to fight
But is to late
She has drowned in the ocean
Of her own making

Could you please comment on this and tell me what you think this is about? Its not really a poem but i thought it was good.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    It was a good read, but don't drown in an ocean you created.

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I like it is so really felling.

  • 18 years ago

    by McCall

    Oooooh!!!! That was really, really nice. It was very pretty in a dark way. I liked it. Very well done.