Last Phone Call

by NightKeeper   Oct 20, 2005


I'm waiting by the phone,
Sitting inthe hall all alone.

I would not let me tears fall:
I'm still waitng for you call.

The phone starts to ring.
The first thing I hear is a girl giggling.

You say "Shhh" and then my name.
You say you're sorry you never came.

I thought"How could you do this to me?"
I can't believe I didn't see.

How could I've been so blind.
Believing you could be so kind?

But it was just one big lie.
I was too mad to cry.

Then I say ever so calmly,
"This is forever good-bye"

I don't really like the end...so could you leave a comment on how I could fix it?

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  • I love this poem....its shows how things really happen...i like the way it ended because it told the truth...keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I love this one to!... you are a good writer i hope you know :)

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Awww this is so sad hod on a lot of guys arre mean but you'll find on good and true ey email if you would like to talk about it or somethinf eale at andreafrand@hotmail.com