by Koriey Korrupted Oct 20, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
COMMUNICATIONS DIE AS A HEART GIVES IN |
by CY GINDLE
PEOPLE CAN BE DI**KS ESPECIALLY KIDS |
Wow...that was good...I really like it...the way you rhyme...the flow...very nice..and the words you used...well done... |
by DeathsLove
Very catchy. It's rare to see poems with a lesson, great job. I loved just how dark and evil this was. It really caught my attention. Amazing way of writting it too. 5/5 |
Another dark piece of writting from you there, which you seem to be very good at. either stanza five or six is my favorite. well done keep up the good work, as i'm sure you will |