I really enjoyed this poem. Your use of words and descriptions worked well to emphasize the message and emotions of this piece. It flowed fluently and was easy to read, the rhyming was almost perfect too. The only problem is the third stanza doesn’t follow the same rhyming pattern as the other stanzas because “appear” and “shared” don’t rhyme.
On the very first line you said, “The right emotions directs my gaze” to be correct it should either be, “The right emotions direct my gaze” or, “The right emotion directs my gaze.”
Overall, a very good poem, I could really feel the emotions and the wording you used really brought it to life. It’s up to you whether you make the corrections, but I feel if you do them it will make this poem one to be proud of.
Thanks for sharing, keep it up.

I really enjoyed this poem. Your use of words and descriptions worked well to emphasize the message and emotions of this piece. It flowed fluently and was easy to read, the rhyming was almost perfect too. The only problem is the third stanza doesn't follow the same rhyming pattern as the other stanzas because "appear" and "shared" don't rhyme.
On the very first line you said, "The right emotions directs my gaze" to be correct it should either be, "The right emotions direct my gaze" or, "The right emotion directs my gaze."
Overall, a very good poem, I could really feel the emotions and the wording you used really brought it to life. It’s up to you whether you make the corrections, but I feel if you do them it will make this poem one to be proud of.
Thanks for sharing, keep it up.