by Lu Oct 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
Time stood still for , tonight we danced |
by neens
Wonderful... such a special memory to be able to have. you wrote it out well |
by HOLLY ARMER
Oh, my! You really set the tone in this, it's so magical and romantic! I especially like the next to last stanza, beautifully conveyed! The entire piece is so mesmerizing and passionate! Well done~Holly |
by Ann Stareyes
A beautiful piece. Moments like these are a treasure and ones we'll cherish forever. Well written... |
by Bill Turner
This is beautiful. So well written. Moments like the one you describe are so precious. Keep them in your heart for those times when you are apart. I am always impressed with your writing, but this one is over the top. |