Dying Love

by DeathsLove   Oct 21, 2005


Crying all night long.
Wondering what went wrong.
Why'd you have to abondon me?
When you we're all I wished to see.
You left me there,
By the stairs.
Tears in my eyes,
But you didn't care.
You walked away,
I have no life.
Without you,
I embrace the knife.
And that night...
I took my life.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    Yea i agree too it's intense =)
    thanks for comenting on my poem, this one was very sad, but i liked it a lot ;)..
    keep on writing!
    take care.

    adios!

    . .. . ..:: .. .. .PiLi

  • 19 years ago

    by DeathsLove

    Thank you for all the feed back. I agree it is intense :)

  • 19 years ago

    by kalyn marie

    I feel u on this! hit me upp some time
    5/5 Kk

  • 19 years ago

    by Emotionless Riot

    Intense.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emotionless Riot

    Intense.

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