Okay... I really like what you have to say, but the way you didn't write out all the words and typos were really distracting to me. So I would suggest a more professional look...write out all the words and check over your work...

"ad i dont know wat 2 do
as i watch the rain fall"

*and (I don't know what to do)

I'm also sorry if you feel this way... I can relate.... Keep writing hon.

xxxx

Well i liked it and you aint gotta write out shit it's cool just da wat it is that's why it's inder SLANG POEMS!!!!!

*way *under