Ocean storm suicide

by the love of another fills my soul   Oct 21, 2005


The oceans storm
so intense
so frightning
yet at the same time so soothing so comferting
while others shiver and hide in fear
i'll stand right out there
feeling the breeze through my hair
the rain soaking my body
the feirce waves hitting the shore
almost knocking me 2 my feet
but i wont stop going
the anger we share, the ocean and i
i walk deeper and deeper
until i feel the icy water above my head, surrounding me
until all i see isblack from inside my eyes
like the oceans storm to my suicide

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem hun take care sarah x

  • 19 years ago

    by the love of another fills my soul

    This is about a girl/guy desperate 2 leave this cold lonely world. so he/she walks into the ocean during a strom and drownds

  • 19 years ago

    by Z

    I'll be honest, I don't really get it, but I definitely like the flow and your word choice.

  • 19 years ago

    by the love of another fills my soul

    Well sorry bout the spelling errors they were short cuts

  • 19 years ago

    by Sharon

    There were just spelling error- but the overall message is soothing yet deadly- I like how the opposites are put together.

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