I like ur poem keep writing..

There were just spelling error- but the overall message is soothing yet deadly- I like how the opposites are put together.

Well sorry bout the spelling errors they were short cuts

I'll be honest, I don't really get it, but I definitely like the flow and your word choice.

This is about a girl/guy desperate 2 leave this cold lonely world. so he/she walks into the ocean during a strom and drownds

Great poem hun take care sarah x