^_____^ that was good. did the guy sorta use the girl for s*x? sweet words! ^_^ kewl

This is really good! im really depressed n at broken point. but i like your poem it reflects on my life

amy

That is beautiful! The words you chose where amazing... the poems emotion is great! An Amazing job u did. It is pure beauty, Great job!
Advice is... Commas and periods. Other then that... it was splendid... in that sad sorta way. Simply... Beautiful.

~Megan~