Glory Fades

by Sean Allen   Oct 21, 2005


It seems so long
since I've gone away,
every minute passing
like the ending of
another day.
Mindless activities,
hopeless proclivity for
all that can stay with me
through the hours of dread:
photographs of feeling that
I spout off the top of my head.
My life is curling,
unfurling, and dropping away;
all the while you say
what I knew you would say:
sic transit gloria.
Well maybe I'm faded,
jaded, and torn today,
but I'll be back;
when I'm back,
I'll be here to stay.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Well maybe I'm faded,
    jaded, and torn today,
    but I'll be back;
    when I'm back,
    I'll be here to stay.
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    I liked those lines so much! I can relate to them kind of. The poem was a little short, But it was good. But those lines really brought it all together. It was a great strong ending. Awesome job!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow this poems reminds me of my movinvg which unfortunately is coming soon, i love the way you rhymed without it being overbearing and it still flowed through the poem well. great job. 5/5

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow. That was profound. So much relevance. I feel that like, practically everyday but did not know how to get it into words. I love it.
    Take Care

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Such strength in the ending. Leaves me with a felling of marching forth ...

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Great poem! My favorite lines were:
    My life is curling,
    unfurling, and dropping away;
    They really stood out to me. But this is a great poem. 5/5**

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