Another helpless lover poem. i again saw that love is the same without distinguishing any titles that we people are used to give ourselves. I sometimes feel the same things you have written in ur poem. thanks u for expressing ur feelings and helping us to see that no one is different.

This was an excellent poem....my fav lines were:
I want to see the trust
That you say you can give
....b/c i canrelate 100% to those two lines...5/5

Aww t0uching lines. very well written
a heartfelt piece. g0od j0b. thanK
y0u s0 mUcH f0r the c0mment 0n
my w0rK! it mean s0o mucH t0 me!
l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
/*x00o00x*\

My god girl!
you have such talent, im glad im friends with some one as great as you! like ive said before, keep writing and never let anything stand in your way
xoxox

Aww hun dat was really gwd i enjoyed reading that one ... keep up the gwd work babe
luv dia mwaz xoxox

This one is really good. Is it about a personal experievce or just a thought??

Love Liz

I really enjoyed this poem. It's a great realization to things goin on in my life.

Wow you were right. This is a really great poem. 5/5. Thanx bunches for the comment.
xoxo
Tasha

I loved this poem. i can really relate to it.. i know a boy just like that. he's the boy i wrote all my older poems about.. but you really don't need boys like that im soo lucky to have moved on. anywho. grreat job! 5/5