by Tess Oct 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Your words hid my body from reality. They put me down and at the same time caused me to see that I meant nothing to you. Stabbing me, your words did not cause me pain but yes; a single tear. It was born and ran down my cheek. It continued rolling but it did not break. It held the pain within itself and it was not going away. I do not recall the tear breaking into nothing. My skin soaked up the moisture and it sunk into my blood stream. It was pumped all around my body, poisoning me in whole, as the pain from that one tear lived on. Once the cycle was ready to begin all over again, the tear had succeeded. Taking my heart as its last victim on the journey, it left my body completely poisoned. Poisoned in my own disbelief. Although I already knew how you felt about me, why did you have to say that? Why did I shed a tear? How could that tear bring me to see the pain within? Why am I poisoned as a result of pain I did not once feel? |
by Beebee
OMG, i love it, i love the title too, it fits so much!! |
by nightschild
Tess, another excellent piece. its so nice to be friends with some one that has so much talent.keep writting |
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by Timothy B
Pain strikes us deep, and without warning. It can leave scars hard to heal. But with pain, comes knowledge of life. |
by dora
W0w that was a deep. a beautiful piece. t0uching lines! sad and heartfelt! keep it up |