I love it I think its amazing I hope evryone else love is too!

Understood. great

Nice job, not my usual kind of poem. But you had meaningful question in it, so good job

I really like this and everything u say is so stue!!! keep on writting its really good hun.

I really liked this one aswell, I agree with you it is one of your strongest ones. Great job, you're a talented writer :)

I agree by far your best work loved it and gave it a five hope you could check out a few of mine well keep it up

OMG!!! when i read this in the contest i literally started crying... this reminds me of a lot that i have been through... and the questions im often left to ask myself and ponder upon... i thought u did an excellent job w/ this, obviously, you got first place... 5/5!!! GREAT JOB!!!

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Very good.
I like the flow.

Great very expressive and flows very well. not too keen on the line that ends "why is water wet" not sure why but it just stood out a little to me, but its a brilant poem

Well, even if a doctor is sickthey can't make themselves better... and.. how i see things is... loving someone isn't about how long it lasts, its about being happy with them, going through things together, growing up together, cherishing the memories, as long as they're well and happy...

Thanks everyone

Alwaysremeniceus didn't really understand your commend could you mayber elaborate

Great poem. i know i ask myself some of those questions every day. keep up the exellent work. 5/5

Thanks everyone I really appreciate your comments!!!

Thank you everyone as I said b 4 I really appreciate your support