Passionate but not quite living to its full potentional.. i dont think the style works for this poem but yeh the context and everything are wonderful:) hope i dont sound rude... keep up the great work hun

Thankyou for the comment and as to you request to read the orginal of Body Mind and Soul I will post it today for yeh:) Ill put it under -Single Pain of Two- okay?

See yeh around
Pure

I liked your poem.The pain can be felt throughout the poem.very nice!

Uve expressed urself really well. t0uching piece. g0od j0b. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk! it meant al0t t0 me!
l0tz 0f l0ve/d0ra

:( So sad... I'm so sorry, hun. If you ever need anyone to talk to I'm always here. Great poem though!!