Awww so sweet, ur a lucky lad, wish i cud do as well at makin poems as ur, u top class, keep up all ur hard work 5/5

That is soo sweet! I loved it! Happy ending! lol Love 'em! hehe
***5/5***
*~*Amanda*~*

Omg dat was so sad at the beginin but den at da end it was sooo sweet..i really enjoyed reading this so i gav it a 5/5 wel done hun
luv ya tc mwa xoxo

OMG this is such a cute poem, when i read the first couple of words I was like awww its going to be sad but it wasnt =] 5/5