Anna,
Wow that was really good! Keep up the good work!
~Heather~

Thank you Heather for commenting. It means alot.

"This time togrther with the boy who gave me this painful yen."

You spelled together wrong.

"I have a secrets you don't know that could be a danger."

Take of the 'a' after have. And you put periods(.) in places that needed a comma(,). Other than those I thought this was a good poem. It flowed nicely. Keep it up!