Kumar, your poetry needs to be seen by a publisher! I love all of your stuff. Just so uplifting and beautiful, all of it.

This piece in particular ... the rhyme scheme and all thats in between - especially the message - really touches the reader. Well Done Sir!

Well Done Indeed!!!!

5/5 - without doubt.

Thanks !!

This is really cool... very touching.. definitely a 5... bye take care and keep writing

Welll welll welllllll done hun... loved it ... i honestly dont know wt to say abt this ... i mean it was beautifull and just amazin keep it up ....
always smile
peaceeee

So deep a feeling it has offered me... that I have no words now... Every line seemed to fit in beautifully. Every word was so true. My fears were once again awakened, yet, the deep happiness was once again rejoiced... Saying "great job" wouldn't be enough... So, I'd like to leave the appreciative words unspoken... or in silence...

Hoping the best for you...

Love,
Ipsita

Hey kumarr!! h0w are y0u darl? neway what a beautiful piece. all y0ur p0ems are beautiful darL! this was heartfelt and great Use 0f w0rds! keep it up! very well written! keep em c0ming!! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
x00o00x

Great poem my friend 5/5 thanks for sharing you're a great poet...the best! hehehehe, take care and always keep it up!

Brill babe brill babe
xxxxxx
i agree wid the first comment u need to see a publisher
xxx

This poem was very encouraging and inspiring. The message was very positive. I'll try to read more of your poems very soon cuz youre a wonderful writer.

Much love,
Nana

Worth the wait, Kumar....Beautiful words from a beautiful heart... So true and beautifully penned...Hope you're doing good and glad to see you posted a new one....

Love Ann

I realliiiiii lyke ur poem

I really liked your poem it put tears in my eyes and chills down my spine

I love this poem!!! It is one of the best I've ever read!!! It touched my heart ... keep writing, you have incredible talent!!!

Much love ... XoXMelanieoXo

This truely touched me...it flowed very well and...woah it was just amazing! Very well written! keep writing you have amazing talent!
-Julz xo

Omg this poem is seriosly one of the best i have ever read on here.. WELL DONE! 5/5.. bec x x

This poem is excellent...it is so true. great job at telling people how things truely are...5/5.
Crystal
p.s. check out some of my poems and comment if you can please it will mean alot to me..thanks if you do..WONDERFUL JOB!!

Hey ur poems so beautiful u truly have talent keep up the good work!!!!5/5

This is so awesome! i luved it! at the moment im exreamly depressed, and this held a little bit! Thanxx!

This is so awesome! i luved it! at the moment im exreamly depressed, and this held a little bit! Thanxx!

Kumar,

yet another totally awesome and completely off the hook poem from you.

You are extremely talented my friend.

Regards,

Steve