Wow, you write a lot like me, and in saying that, I LOVE this poem. So much passion. I love your rhyme scheme and your word choice. This is simply beautiful!

Hi kumar,
honestly telling i liked it very much.
specially i ilked the 2nd stanza. well written . i really wanna read more of urs.

Aaaaaaaawwwwwwwww amazing poem.......it kinda speachless.lol...........ur a talented person....nice work......no great work....no..........FANASTIC work, keep it up.