I like this poem, especially the repetitive phrase,
but she doest care,
she wants to be dead.
gashes and cuts,
bullet marks on her head.

it makes a nice ending as well.

good work. keep going

xXx

This is a damn good poem it made my day

This is a damn good poem it made my day

Good poem:) although its long, it doesnt lose it half way through, its great right up to the end. the repetitive phrase worked well too. keep up the good work.:)xxx