Comments : Everytime

  • 19 years ago

    by K

    Great poem Ashley tell him like it is!!!
    It's always the bad ones who mess it up for the good ones sometimes. Keep them great poems coming!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason

    That was deep....i can totally relate...great job, keep on writing

  • 19 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Very good Poem, I appreciate your comment but theres one thing, Im a guy, in love with a girl, u probly thought i was a female, cuz u said, ure in love with that guy, but Im a guy. lol its okay and everything honest mistake, but just thought u should know, Great Poem, ttyl sometime

    PeAcE

    ~RiCo SmootH~

  • 19 years ago

    by ErIcKa

    Hey.. thanks for the comment.. it means a lot when people tell me how i'm doing.. it keeps me going... i luv ur poem great job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Great poem. I really liked the wording of it. It has very good imagery.

  • 19 years ago

    by Darien

    I feel like the guy in that situation. I am actually crawling back to my ex girlfriend, because I let her go, and I regret it. Nice poem, I really liked it. I can relate.

  • 19 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I wanted to give thispoem a 4 so bad (no offense) but i couldn't let myself do t because i don't care about the poem and it's rythm (which i couldn't find one... i'll keep trying) more than i care about the meaning it's sending out. I am sure that one of my poems was like this, and i felt the same way. 5/5

    good job!
    ~stevie~
    ~yellowfeverlime~

  • 19 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Beautiful poem!

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I can relate to this (sigh) great write

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    This one is reli nice too.. i think it wudve been better n more bitter if u made it rhyme, but its still gr8.. i lyk ur topic.. and u got ur message across
    take care
    Nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Wow,you really put some emotion into this. The concept of it was good.It was great.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Hey I really liked this poem, good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    This one is great too, I hope that you feel better, I'm sure he'll see you're the one, keep putting this kind of passion into your writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    Another awsome one. I gave it a 5.5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    I like how much emotion you put into this poem, it was enjoyable. I read it so many times, over and over. I realyl have nothing to say, except MAKE A PART 2!!! lol. Awesome poem. good job. you write too good to be a (idunno)

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    I love this poem, I'm gonna add you to my favorites, you are so talented!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Beautiful poem, keep it up!
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • *sigh*...this poem is a great poem and it brings back so many memories of when I was in that situation

  • 18 years ago

    by Alysa

    OMG. I RELATED TO THIS POEM SOOO MUCH... !it seems like everything my boyfriend says to me, isnt even true... it hurts a lot, and i also hope that one day he'll realize that he is the one that screwed up.. no me!
    I LOVED THIS POEM =]
    its rele good