by K
Great poem Ashley tell him like it is!!! |
by Jason
That was deep....i can totally relate...great job, keep on writing |
Very good Poem, I appreciate your comment but theres one thing, Im a guy, in love with a girl, u probly thought i was a female, cuz u said, ure in love with that guy, but Im a guy. lol its okay and everything honest mistake, but just thought u should know, Great Poem, ttyl sometime |
by ErIcKa
Hey.. thanks for the comment.. it means a lot when people tell me how i'm doing.. it keeps me going... i luv ur poem great job 5/5 |
by Little Dot
Great poem. I really liked the wording of it. It has very good imagery. |
by Darien
I feel like the guy in that situation. I am actually crawling back to my ex girlfriend, because I let her go, and I regret it. Nice poem, I really liked it. I can relate. |
I wanted to give thispoem a 4 so bad (no offense) but i couldn't let myself do t because i don't care about the poem and it's rythm (which i couldn't find one... i'll keep trying) more than i care about the meaning it's sending out. I am sure that one of my poems was like this, and i felt the same way. 5/5 |
by Brokeback
Beautiful poem! |
I can relate to this (sigh) great write |
by NannO
This one is reli nice too.. i think it wudve been better n more bitter if u made it rhyme, but its still gr8.. i lyk ur topic.. and u got ur message across |
by Kaitlyn
Wow,you really put some emotion into this. The concept of it was good.It was great. |
Hey I really liked this poem, good job |
by Alex Marlatt
This one is great too, I hope that you feel better, I'm sure he'll see you're the one, keep putting this kind of passion into your writing |
by Allison
Another awsome one. I gave it a 5.5 :) |
by The Wingless
I like how much emotion you put into this poem, it was enjoyable. I read it so many times, over and over. I realyl have nothing to say, except MAKE A PART 2!!! lol. Awesome poem. good job. you write too good to be a (idunno) |
by obsessedgurl
I love this poem, I'm gonna add you to my favorites, you are so talented! |
by Angie
Beautiful poem, keep it up! |
*sigh*...this poem is a great poem and it brings back so many memories of when I was in that situation |
by Alysa
OMG. I RELATED TO THIS POEM SOOO MUCH... !it seems like everything my boyfriend says to me, isnt even true... it hurts a lot, and i also hope that one day he'll realize that he is the one that screwed up.. no me! |