Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox and btw no the rhymes were not weak they were awesome

OMG!! I hate it when you put yourself down, i totally look up to ur style of writing. Hun i hope you're ok, i know how much that can suck. What an arsehole:P
here 4 u hun xoxo