These Chains

by RadianceInReverse   Oct 22, 2005


I wanna break-free
Won't somebody please help me
Break-free from these chains
that hold me down
so far that I can barely breathe.

I'm so tired of this restraint
because its blinding my vision
and I can't see anything before me

Please release me from these chains
that are starving me of my life
that are bringing me
deeper into the ground
So I can't be found

I cry as I plead for the freedom
that I dream of
As I stare at the world
through these cold bars
That are leaving these mental scars!

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  • 19 years ago

    by jinxerella

    Lol, u don't have to keep commenting on my poems...but i'll keep commenting on urs! lol......i love this poem....it reminds me of me and how my parents won't leave me alone or won't let me free! i hate that...but this poem speaks for all! its awsome!

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hey great subject maybe play with style and see if it pops a bit better:) great work, thnk you for you ment comments :)

    Jenn