Oh torture
You speak to me without words
How can you be so powerful
without being seen
A sixth sense
that makes me shiver and scream
your like a nightmare walking the streets
unfortunately living through me
This core is hallow
and drowning me
life is flawful
lacking sanity
Subliminal messages seeping into my mind
Sex, drugs, and alcohol corrupting lives
Strong messages i find all around
If i do not abide it feels like being stabbed with knives
Leaving unseen scars left behind.
This torture is strong
and i am weak
longing for eturnal sleep
cut my wrists and let me bleed
Death is the only way to be
Free from all of this insanity
Which this troubled society caused
A tortured soul they have lost.
Hey
a really good one u have here..
esp the 2nd last stanza
''This torture is strong
and i am weak
longing for eturnal sleep
cut my wrists and let me bleed''
nicely done=)
5/5 surely
if u could, pls check out my poems and tell me what u think..
thanx