My Love, His Hate

by RadianceInReverse   Oct 22, 2005


My Love for him burns
like a thousand fires
like an unbeatable flame
no one can put out

His love for me
doesn't exist
its as cold as ice
so cold that it burns
a hole in my heart

My love for him
will last till the end of time
My heart will bleed
Until the day he is finally mine

His love for her
will last and never end
and he doesn't care
that I love him.

I will never forget
His big blue eyes and his big wide smile
I don't think he'll miss me
not even for a little while

as I look at the blood
that is dripping from my wrist
I say,
"I rather not have a life to live,
than to live a life without him!"

This is another poem I wrote off the top of my head So I hope you liked it!!! (Plz Comment) THANX!!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by kida

    This is good, really deep. i asure u though thatdeath can not make life better i have learned that. i also think if u were 2 go in front of him and kill yourself bcause of him he would stop u no mattert wat u thik. cause me and my bf got in a fiht and he told me 2 kill myself and i nearly did right therebut he stopped me even though it was his idea. ok thats was too long 4 a comment but oh well. thanks 4 da comment on mine.

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Cute, again maybe expand on feelings, try stanzas or something to make it really stand out:)

    Keep it up hun
    Jenn