This subject matter is always hard to talk about but you did very well, great job hun. I hope your friend and his sister are alright no one should be hit for any reason...

thankyou very much for you comment:) it meant alot to me

Jenn

So sorry they have to go through that...and this poem need to be better to...spelling mistake...and you can make the sentence even greater...you know what I mean? You can make it more touching...so that the readers can feel exactly what they go through...