Shattered Pieces of My Heart (Unfinished)

by Weeping Wolf   Oct 22, 2005


* I'm not sure yet how I'm gonna put this in a poem, but for now here are just the words...You can still comment but I'll fix it later:) thx to all my readers I love you all...peace*

The shattered pieces of my heart lay scattered endlessly along the broken road that i ever long to stray from. He loves me but I can't give him my heart that lies bleeding in someone else's hands. The flames seek me, the stars seek him, he seeks laughter, I seek him but I can never give him laughter if he won't seek me. Leaving me alone in the burning fires without his smile for comfort. I want to betray salvation he wants to find it, I want to destroy the world, he wants to save it.

~The only men I've ever met are the ones who want to own the world...but hes the first I've found who wants to save it...~

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Layla, that's beautiful.

    Wants to save the world? I think we need more of those!

    blush
    xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Z

    I love it! Leave it the way it is, it could be the introduction to the book you will one day publish. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Hey,it's pretty good.

    layla, i hope u kno this is rainy rite?!?

    i have a poem called "Bleeding heart,scattered on paper"....

    Can u read it and tell me what u think? It was kinda random. But it tells something...