Comments : Shattered Pieces of My Heart (Unfinished)

  • 19 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Hey,it's pretty good.

    layla, i hope u kno this is rainy rite?!?

    i have a poem called "Bleeding heart,scattered on paper"....

    Can u read it and tell me what u think? It was kinda random. But it tells something...

  • 19 years ago

    by Z

    I love it! Leave it the way it is, it could be the introduction to the book you will one day publish. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Layla, that's beautiful.

    Wants to save the world? I think we need more of those!

    blush
    xxxx