I loved this poem, it had that very dark element that only few understand. You're a very good writer. I cant wait to read more.
Carly

Woah. that was intense. I know what it's like having people continually asking if you're ok. I love the last two lines, can relate to that pretty well. I'm sure you are strong enogh to make it through.
Thank you again for your comment on my poem.
*VioletRaven*

Thats a nice poem! and yea sometime i feel the same way