This is another great poem, excellent work. You are such an awesome poet.
Missing you always. (lol, well not always.....)
Matt

Oh wow that poem was phenominal i cant wait to read more bye youespecially if they are like that wow it was so deep and filled with so much raw emotion i loved it

lots of love
☼Becky☼

Suzie you have made a boring computers lesson
heaps worth going on the net
keep it up it was so good
im gonna read all the others now
:)

Wow this is so powerful im loving this more than anything i have ever read. so much beauty..

You dont need me to tell u how good you are... however i enjoy it. this is on eof my favoites. good work!!!

Ruby

Really Dark, i love it, cept for the 2b2 rhyming, but i can live with it 5/5

Such an outstanding poem. It truely is grand.