Pretty Poem

by Sammy McGill   Dec 7, 2003


I'll write a pretty poem,
A poem with a twist.
I'll write it with a razor blade,
I'll write it on my wrist.
And if i write it properly,
A fountian will appear.
And with that pretty fountain,
All my problems disappear.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Billie Jo McClellan

    sammy this is my fav poem i had to comment twice!!! lol. i have it on my wall and in my adgenda. CHARLES said you give me bad ideas. lol gtg. love ya. beebop.

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    Wow...I really thought this poem had a lot of meanign, it was very deep..and i look foward to readin alot more of yours...great job!

  • 20 years ago

    by Kevin McNulty

    hi Sammy, I thought this was an excellent poem. It was great to read even thought it had a somewhat 'sick' tale behind it. I'll cerainly take pleasure in reading the rest, K

  • 20 years ago

    by Billie Jo McClellan

    sammy. i am suprised. i love this poem. um, maybe you would like to tell me why you wrote this, you know, because i am your best friend. i like this poem, and i am copying it and tapeing it to my wall, then my sister will really think i am crazy. well e-mail me later, and i will try to call.

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