Hey, I told you that I was gonna read/comment your poems so here it go's! I thougt that the poem was OK but you can probably do better!

Elliemay

Ohmygod that is great..exactly how a poem should be...straight from the heart and wrote down for others to compare it with tmeselves...marvellous

This was a great poem , a poem that was given a lot of thought , you took your emotions and put them into something great , this person really does care about you , more than you will ever know , keep up the good work , and i ahev a feeling that she will always be there for you as well no matter wat , i have a feeling that you r the most wonderful that has happened to her.