by Anthony Oct 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The tears that escape from my eyes, |
Gr8 poem! keep up the gr8 work! 5/5! |
This is also an original poem! Keep writing. 5/5 |
I like the idea of tears on the sill. Very metaphoric. "Loose" should be "lose". |
by Truest Lies
That was deep, and even though the words were quite simple, it still afforded the poem a certain type of calm beauty which was very interesting to read. I like emotional poems, and I certainly liked this one! |
Wow! That was a very deep poem! The emotion was sensational! I really loved this poem. I can feel the pain. Great job! My favorite part was the ending: |