Hey!
i really liked this poem...
it was just...right. and it made me understand..i dont really know what haha but good job.
and i really like all of your work.
thanks so much. it was amazing

That is so short/simple and right to the point...such poems make me feel as a fool..writing so long trying to xpress when somethings in life could be xplained in some simple lines..great work...take care and all the best