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by Lost & Delirious Oct 22, 2005 category : Love, romance / i love you
It's winter in your dark brown eyes, It's freezing cause you're cold as ice. I can't find a place in your life, Your sadness has been a sharp knife. My mind skates in your frozen lake, I spin so fast, I need a brake. Snowflakes fall from your silent sky, I catch a cold breath when I fly. Ask me to swim in your river, Please, let me feel your love shiver. At your wet street I'm on my knees, In your world I search for my peace.
by LadyPearl
I like it, nice descriptions
by Carmen
In the second stanza, thrid line, you said "form"; i think thats supposed to be "from". otherwise, luved it. 5/5