Would you Care??

by La Vie Boheme   Oct 22, 2005


If i started to cry
Would you care
If i wanted to die
Would you care
If i said my life was crap
What would you have to say to that
One little knife
Could change my entire life
Don't you see
There is nothing left for me
My faith is gone
I probably won't live 'till dawn
I'm sorry i hurt you
I'm sorry about what i put you through
Please don't cry for me
I didn't have anything left you see
Death is upon me
I take my knife and count to three
Bye Mom Bye Dad
I'm sorry that i caused you pain
But i have nothing left to gain
I look at life one last time
I'm sorry but this is the end of the line

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Death is upon me

    this is what makes good your poem mostly.. others words was also nicely used.. an excellent work.

    and i will must give you 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ANNA

    I like ur peom it shows lot of feeling please read mine