by Jamie Oct 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
**For the title i wanna do something is to something as something is to something but not the words i used so ill find something else is you have any ideas thatd be great i know this poem id real simple but im bored!!!** |
Gr8 again...btw thnx 4 commentin on my stuff..much appreciated. anyway...gr8 poem. good rhythm...all around good poem! |
by Shy
Very nice, you used words that are not common words but people still understand so is not overbearing |
by Torn
Ah that is amazing. I look up to you r so much in your skills so much. This is another great poem really awesome. it's so sad because it's so true. I'll be yuo helping hand:P if ever you need though hun, seriously..just pm me or something k?! take care xoxo |
by Amanda
Hey thanks for the comment. It is a good piece, keep writing and your work is quite good! I love poems that are straight from the heart. Shows you how the person really feels. I'm feeling a little better today. :) |