by Robert Gardiner Oct 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I Want a Girl!!! |
by robyn
If didnt have a man i would be all that and more.... your words are sensual and seductive, beautifully written. |
by gabs
Wow ... im speachless that was an excellent poem like usual you did an outstanding job!! well Done... keep it up! |
by ChildofGod87
Wow, very powerful and very beautiful! I didn't think this poem could be so deep of words:).. Well Done! Keep it up! God Bless You:) |
by Ana Vidovic
This was very cute! Thanks for reading my poem:) It sure sounds like you have the perfect ideal image of what you want, and thats nice. Sometimes however, what we think we want is not what we get so we get turned away. Other times, we are so blown away by a persons inner beauty that this ideal image withers away and all we're faced with is reality. Love is really like a delicate rose, if you treat it with the right nutrients it will prosper and grow. When two minds are intertwined in such a way, nothing can seperate them, and that love becomes immortal. There is someone for everyone i believe:) |
by Renee
I love how you explain what kind of woman you want, and what all she would be to you. It was an amazing poem, and you have an incredible vocabulary. Great job with this |