Comments : A weeping willow

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    Nice meter. Nice poem. Actually, great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Well done! This flows well and the imagery is great! I especially like these lines:

    "hidden beside the winding stream
    no one hears the willows screams"

    Very well done! The only suggestion I have is about the title! It doesn't do this poem justice! Take care~Holly