Hmmmz this makes me think :P good work hunni
xox rc

Hey,

Nami is going through hard times, you can trust her but if you feel you can't talk to her. good poem though, i like how you say it how it is, many people can't.

Much love Sammi

This is a great poem keep writing more.and ill be posting another poem soon so comment mine if you have the time.

Wow very good poem i like it...thank you for your comment!! -Amirah

It was very good. thx for the comment. i liked it and could relate alot. def. 5/5 but work on ur flow a bit.

Wow, awsome poem. hits kinda close to home. well done dude, keep it up!

Nice poem.........if u came up to me and just asked me i wud of gave u an answer straight away but if u found it hard to ask then thats ok. for a couple of months my life hasnt been the same........n i dont blame u for feeling this way......i knw i can trust u n that i neva ment for us 2 break our friendship....i dont even knw y this happend........i tried n i really did 4 this not to happen but it did n i didnt knw wat to do........since then my life has fallen apart even more coz u wer the light in my day n now ur not there then nothing is at all.......u'll always b in my heart but i dont knw bout u.u knw everything bout me n u wer the one i cud speak to bout everything but now ur not there......n im scared to make anotha best friend coz i dona wana lose them....now im jus a nami thats walks on the path of life not knwing wer she will end up.

Wow.. i really liked your poem..i feel the same w/ my friends also.. keep writing.. thanx for the comment!