The razorblade

by dani   Oct 23, 2005


I'm gonna write a poem
a poem with a twist
I'm gonna use a razor blade
and write it on my wrist

I'm gonna dig in deep
and watch the blood flow out
and im gonna promise you one thing,
and thats not to scream or shout

I'm gonna let the blood trickle
trickle onto the floor
and if you hurt me one more time
I'll do it more and more

and when you find me lying there cold and finally gone
and you don't know why i killed myself
I'll know it was your fault all along

now I've written my poem
my poem with a twist
my razor blade is blunt now
i used it on my wrist

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  • 19 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, great poem, really well written 5/5!
    emmaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Awesome..I liked it a lot...Kinda reminds me of myself in some ways...Keep up the good work!!! Love of Love...-Aubrey.

  • 19 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Terrific! Loved it. 5/5

    -Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by TaTtErEdXhEaRt

    I liked th poem. Ive heard the first part before..But i like the way you kinds added on to it. Good job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Melanie

    I liked this poem alot. I can relate, and i liked how you made it sad but it was not like something that would make you cry. Good job
    love,
    Melanie