I liked this poem alot. I can relate, and i liked how you made it sad but it was not like something that would make you cry. Good job
love,
Melanie

I liked th poem. Ive heard the first part before..But i like the way you kinds added on to it. Good job 5/5

Terrific! Loved it. 5/5

-Taylor

Awesome..I liked it a lot...Kinda reminds me of myself in some ways...Keep up the good work!!! Love of Love...-Aubrey.

Wow, great poem, really well written 5/5!
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